AS A HIGHLY-SEXED WIFE/MOM LIKE LORA..WITH MY OWN ADULT ZACH & COOPER..YOUR FAMILY FUN POST WAS SO TERRIFIC AND SEX-CHARGED..NOTHING HOTTER FOR WOMEN/MOMS LIKE MYSELF THAN TO READ AND PARTICIPATE IN TOTAL FAMILY ACTION..WITH HOT BI ACTION BETWEEN STUD SON & DAD..WITH MOM IN THE CENTER OF IT ALL..READ YOUR PREVIOUS POST "AVALON" WHERE HARRY THE OTHER STUD SON GETS INTO BI FUN WITH ZACH.. DAMN HOT....SO..PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR.. "SERIES" TELLING US MORE ABOUT THIS HOTTTTTTT FAMILY..AND A TOTAL FAMILY "ORGY"..
Overall, I liked it. But tell us the truth--you write for the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation and you're hoping the bureaucratic managers swipe this up and make it as the pilot and turn it into a series. Hell, if I suffered through episodes of the Beachcomers, surely this would be a piece of cake. Okay! Okay! I'm only joking, but for a moment the thought was there.
A good premise and hope there's more to come. William in Toronto.
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AS A HIGHLY-SEXED WIFE/MOM LIKE LORA..WITH MY OWN ADULT ZACH & COOPER..YOUR FAMILY FUN POST WAS SO TERRIFIC AND SEX-CHARGED..NOTHING HOTTER FOR WOMEN/MOMS LIKE MYSELF THAN TO READ AND PARTICIPATE IN TOTAL FAMILY ACTION..WITH HOT BI ACTION BETWEEN STUD SON & DAD..WITH MOM IN THE CENTER OF IT ALL..READ YOUR PREVIOUS POST "AVALON" WHERE HARRY THE OTHER STUD SON GETS INTO BI FUN WITH ZACH.. DAMN HOT....SO..PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR.. "SERIES" TELLING US MORE ABOUT THIS HOTTTTTTT FAMILY..AND A TOTAL FAMILY "ORGY"..
Certainly a story with a different twist...
Overall, I liked it. But tell us the truth--you write for the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation and you're hoping the bureaucratic managers swipe this up and make it as the pilot and turn it into a series. Hell, if I suffered through episodes of the Beachcomers, surely this would be a piece of cake. Okay! Okay! I'm only joking, but for a moment the thought was there.
A good premise and hope there's more to come. William in Toronto.
Thanks!
Cheers to both of you for the commentary. (I've never had the pleasure, or frustration, of working for the esteemed CBC.)
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