Alternate Reality: Male Visits Gyno

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stupid. Could've been good. A Matriarcal society makes much more sense than the one we have. Women are the life givers. They can concieve, carry, and nurture a new generation. Men are physically stronger very often, but we are not visually appealing and to procreate all we do is supply the sperm. Women do the rest, so we're basically good for 'grunt work'. There should've been more buildup. The Doctor, though not described as pretty, should have been more agressive. It is, after all, a female dominated society. The main character's speech indicates a slightly submissive and repressed tendancy. She should have been more overt in taking advantage of him and then PERSONALLY discussed circumcision with the fiance' while he felt humiliated. The story just needs to be 'fleshed out' more. Doc should have decided on the quality of his semen by tasting it after having him ejaculate into a graduated cylinder to measure the quantity of it. She could then have reccomended a medication to give his semen a better taste and another med to increase the quantity. Both of which would have embarrassed him.