Serial Lover Ch. 03

Chapter 4?!?!?!

Whoa these short chapters are so tantalizing they're killing me. Could you please let your faithful readers know when to expect an update?

wow this story is perfect for noncon. the stuff with her family is sick but i love this story none the less. i mean i understand why the family had to die. really good story and please hurry with the next chapter

Another good chapter! He can't do it, he likes her! Dying for the next chapter already ;).

She's a total tart

This portrays this girl as much of a psycho as the killer. Here she has witnessed brutality, he has told her his intention is to kill her (ie. she is not leaving alive), he has her family held hostage (somewhere and they may be dead for all she knows), and has cut her, all within a very short length of time yet she's aroused by him? WTF. Seriously, her reactions are not even remotely plausible. You are rushing her attraction to the point where it has gotten absurd.

On the edge of my seat!!

I noticed your notes where others have complaints but I love everything about it!! I love how it switches back and forth from him to her and can't wait for the next chapter!!! Don't make us wait much longer!!

I hate you so much for these short chapters... it's like falling in a well and you get found, they throw down the rope start pulling you up but all of a sudden stop and leave you dangling above the ground... too high to drop and too far too climb

hmmm..save the brother?

I love dark nonconsent as much as the next person, but I hope that she somehow saves her brother. He obviously asked where she was because he does care a bit about her and he's her only family member left! Maybe it could redeem them both in a way where they realize that they do care about one another.

The story has me on the edge of my seat now. I do love dark romances, but it's creepy if she does fuck him (which she probably will since this is erotica) after he killed off all of her family (in the end, they are her family no matter what) and she knows it...hmmm. cant wait to see what happens next though!

Thank you c:

Thanks again for the comments, and I'm sorry they're short!! I've started classes again and I'm not free very often, but I hope I can squeeze In more writing soon.

The reason it takes so long for new chapters to come out is because (for the non-writers here) submitting work takes like a week for it to appear and sometimes it doesn't go through so I have to edit it or just wait it out. I would love to give you chapters like every day but you know..

Is it twisted to enjoy his inner conflict?

No doubt that he is a blood thirsty crazy ass mf... yet you make him somehow endearing. Long ago I tossed 'magic cock' into the discussion for those inexplicable and instantaneous swoony submissions of gals to a Grade A asshole dude. I've been combing through my thesaurus for the proper reverse... Magical muffin? Preternatural pussy? Maybe Belle booty, for the beauty who tamed the beast? Our anti-hero has certainly lost his perspective here. :D:D:D

As for her actions/feelings...
1. Her family sucks
2. She wants to stay alive
3. Well...he IS kinda hot.... ;)

Where would Clyde have been without his Bonnie? Certainly not world famous, just another two bit hoodlum....

Mmm...yum

When is he going to take her? I mean, I know he said he would that night, but will that be the next chapter? Also, go ahead and kill the brother if you want to, you have my full support. Jerk. Is it wrong for me to be jealous of the girl? Don't answer that. Can't wait for more!

WOW!

This is one of the most twisted, scary, intense, interesting story I have read. You should send some of your work to a publishing company. In the mean time I hope you continue to add chapters. You have fast become a favourite of mine.

please continue

Hope that you will consider continuing this story. It's good so far so please post up new chapters soon.

It's Macabre, Gruesome. I LOVE IT! :)

Wow! Fantastic story, but please hurry up and either update again or post chapter 4.

This Is Extremely Cool

You should finish it.

please

Write more please

Agh

This is why I never start on stories with chapters! I get so into them and then they just stop >.< this is by far my favorite thing I've read here, I guess because I connect a little

love it!

Please continue writing. This is definitely my favorite story on literotica