Good beginning...but you NEED to supply the follow on immediately! You can't wait two, three or more days! Keep writing! *W*
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Anonymous09/27/13
Thanks for the open comments
Thank you for your opening commentary. If not for that I would have read your story. And while I enjoy the incest stories, I do not enjoy some of the rougher stories. I wish more authors would include these type if disclaimers when covering more than one theme in their stories. 5*s for the disclaimer! I hope others will enjoy your work.
but the developing story may become more sexually arousing as things develope. Nothing wrong with the plot/characters/or thoughts. Just that I am so turned off by male gayness, that the initial happenings biased my emotions. In retrospect, I would have to declare it as an error on my part. Looking forward to the developing story. Thank you.
I don't like stories with anal, choking or m/m sex. And thanks to you I don't have to find out that this isn't a story for me halfway through. 5* for that alone!
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Nice Beginning
Good beginning...but you NEED to supply the follow on immediately! You can't wait two, three or more days! Keep writing! *W*
Thanks for the open comments
Thank you for your opening commentary. If not for that I would have read your story. And while I enjoy the incest stories, I do not enjoy some of the rougher stories. I wish more authors would include these type if disclaimers when covering more than one theme in their stories. 5*s for the disclaimer! I hope others will enjoy your work.
NOT A FIVE RATING (YET)...
but the developing story may become more sexually arousing as things develope. Nothing wrong with the plot/characters/or thoughts. Just that I am so turned off by male gayness, that the initial happenings biased my emotions. In retrospect, I would have to declare it as an error on my part. Looking forward to the developing story. Thank you.
Another thanks for the disclaimer
I don't like stories with anal, choking or m/m sex. And thanks to you I don't have to find out that this isn't a story for me halfway through. 5* for that alone!
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