The wife doesn't go conservative...the go feminist, Liberal Feminist. They don't think there job is to satisfy your sexual needs...that's not conservative....When a wife freezes you out.. either your not paying her attention or she's watching the View, and considers your interest in her, as attacking her body...that is Feminism... Sorry your little story just turns me off...I luv full figured woman, married one. Your personal war against Feminist woman and Kids that come from families of wealth i.e. Class envy...turns this story OFF.
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Anonymous09/29/13
Awesome
ignore the other comment, this story rules. Maybe it's one for the men. 10/10
The guy's lucky in all senses but risking a lot for his fun.
I've been the older student on campus but not had the luck your protagonist did.
As to the companionate but not sexy marriage with the wife, it's dangerous assuming what worked when they went down the aisle works a ways down the road. Bodies and attitudes change over time.
They have to be honest about what makes them hot and helps get them in the mood.
They both gotta be willing to do what the other likes/needs It's work sometimes, but can be a fascinating bit of exploration together.
Why does Lisa have to a slag if she likes sex and doesn't apologize for it?
I don't see a slag. I see a girl having real problems taking her health seriously.
She's young, and trying things out. The whole bareback thing's tempting fate though.
Thanks for the feedback! I use slag as both a demeaning sexual word and also in the same way geeks are happy to be called geeks nowadays. I have female friends who are happy to be called and call themselves slags during sex and in appropriate context in conversation.
I know bareback is risky but that's why it's on here, a pure fantasy. The sequel is pending as we speak so keep an eye out if you enjoyed this one! The marriage is explored a little more with even more development in the third instalment. Thanks again!
by
Anonymous10/11/13
klippert
you must remember that conservatives and feminists agree on one thing, they both hate porn!
by
Anonymous01/26/17
A Great Work
This series may well be the best-written that I've ever seen on this site. I myself am working on an English degree. Though I've had struggles with creative writing, I've always wanted to put some of my work on this site, and I'll be looking to you as an inspiration. You've managed to piece together all these different aspects of erotica in a way that proves your dedication to the craft: not being overly wordy while providing solid exposition, devoting description to the sex scenes - it's almost like I'm there. Every sequel and new story you put out is better than the last.
I wish you well, and hope you continue your work.Scratch that - please, please write more stories. Thank you.
English
Feminist not conservative
The wife doesn't go conservative...the go feminist, Liberal Feminist. They don't think there job is to satisfy your sexual needs...that's not conservative....When a wife freezes you out.. either your not paying her attention or she's watching the View, and considers your interest in her, as attacking her body...that is Feminism... Sorry your little story just turns me off...I luv full figured woman, married one. Your personal war against Feminist woman and Kids that come from families of wealth i.e. Class envy...turns this story OFF.
Awesome
ignore the other comment, this story rules. Maybe it's one for the men. 10/10
Hot but disturbing story.
The guy's lucky in all senses but risking a lot for his fun.
I've been the older student on campus but not had the luck your protagonist did.
As to the companionate but not sexy marriage with the wife, it's dangerous assuming what worked when they went down the aisle works a ways down the road. Bodies and attitudes change over time.
They have to be honest about what makes them hot and helps get them in the mood.
They both gotta be willing to do what the other likes/needs It's work sometimes, but can be a fascinating bit of exploration together.
Why does Lisa have to a slag if she likes sex and doesn't apologize for it?
I don't see a slag. I see a girl having real problems taking her health seriously.
She's young, and trying things out. The whole bareback thing's tempting fate though.
@Txcoatl
Thanks for the feedback! I use slag as both a demeaning sexual word and also in the same way geeks are happy to be called geeks nowadays. I have female friends who are happy to be called and call themselves slags during sex and in appropriate context in conversation.
I know bareback is risky but that's why it's on here, a pure fantasy. The sequel is pending as we speak so keep an eye out if you enjoyed this one! The marriage is explored a little more with even more development in the third instalment. Thanks again!
klippert
you must remember that conservatives and feminists agree on one thing, they both hate porn!
A Great Work
This series may well be the best-written that I've ever seen on this site. I myself am working on an English degree. Though I've had struggles with creative writing, I've always wanted to put some of my work on this site, and I'll be looking to you as an inspiration. You've managed to piece together all these different aspects of erotica in a way that proves your dedication to the craft: not being overly wordy while providing solid exposition, devoting description to the sex scenes - it's almost like I'm there. Every sequel and new story you put out is better than the last.
I wish you well, and hope you continue your work.Scratch that - please, please write more stories. Thank you.
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