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by Anonymous

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by LesseloovesPeter09/12/13

Some good lines, some not so good (the deep fuck line seemed out of place) interesting choice to use the letter B rather than be. Didn't vote.

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by lonelyhousewife3209/13/13

The difference between...

a friend and a lover is a lover is temporary. So best case scenario a friend you love fucking and spend forever with? Sounds like a keeper.

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