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Disgusting
A cheating whore cunt skank wife is born.
Move along,
Nothing of interest here.
Waste of time
Sophomoric writing suitable to a middle schooler. Minimal character development, no reasoning, no rationale, no plot to speak of.
Just a boring story about an old slut. Don't waste your time, I'm sorry I did.
Non Erotic Drivel
Enough said 1* Move on
You Need to Change Your Name
You need to change your name to: Lillyliverednonman!
Just a run-of-the-mill piece of garbage by a garbage author.
They crawl out of their holes, post a piece of crap, and crawl back into the slime.
She didn't Care
"I'm Yours"....what kind of crap is that, she gets screwed once and totally throws away her life and her marriage....going to grow old alone. Your characters are shallow, without any redeeming value...only thing that could make this story work is when her husband finds her "marked" and kicks her out.
Not really a story
Just some pointless dribble.
NEW CLICHES AND NEW EXPERIENCES
happen daily, but for the best, not always, TK U MLJ LV NV
Your point?
I have to agree with the rest...it lacks foundation, passion and credibility--and therefore isn't even a little sexually exciting.
Porno Drivel
Typical young male porn fantasy. Woman sees cock and is overcome. It doesn't happen in real life only in porn films.
About what I would expect.
From a guy who's Bio says he is attached, over 60 and a swinger, ha ha ha ha, sure you are, putz, and a lame story. In real life she would be the one dumped for a younger model.
Disappointing!
Extremely disappointing, actually.No woman would react as she did - no matter how strong the urge.
Was the title supposed to be ironic?
There's nothing new here, just the same story told over and over and over and over ...
The reason for what happened
The guy was paid $100 up front and promised another $100 upon completion of his assignment.
Where Is ?*
The story!!!!.
This is a Story?
It's more like an overworked scene. And a bad one at that. Enough said.
Such A Pity...
...that we can't give ratings of zero.
This was truly appalling!
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