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by Anonymous02/17/04

wonderful

cordelia

you have wonderful talent.
it's so inspiring

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by Belilica02/18/04

Oh my...

The words just roll off your tongue. So incredibly sensual.

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by BooMerengue07/10/04

!

I can do this... I can do this... I KNOW I can do this...

Thanks Cordy! Its terriffic!

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by Lalenya Love07/10/04

A Gem of a Sonnet

Beautiful and sparkling! Your writing truly shines! Please continue to submit quality poems such as this one.

Cheers,
Lalenya :^)

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by duckiesmut11/04/04

this line...

caught and held me:

a touch of inhibition, sapphire blue

Lovely...just lovely.

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