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by Anonymous

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by LesseloovesPeter09/13/13

Clever rhyme scheme, like this one!

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by tazz31709/13/13

IS THIS AN ODE ON A TOMBSTONE

or one in sorrow and all alone, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by tazz31709/13/13

#2 REMEMBERING WHAT WAS

or the old fashioned That Was What Happened and I am bragging, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by loveking12/12/13

Like minds

We seem to be lamenting the passing of youth. Dreaming of what used to be but will never be again.

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