You make everything sound so reasonable.I imagine your bed is seldom empty.
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Anonymous09/18/13
grrr
there are a few thing you really need to look up one its not king it is pharaoh and they didn't wear purple they wore leopard skins over their shoulders and added a lion’s tail to hang from their belt and it was not Hades.When the body died, parts of its soul known as ka (body double) and the ba (personality) would go to the Kingdom of the Dead. While the soul dwelt in the Fields of Aaru, Osiris demanded work as restitution for the protection he provided. Statues were placed in the tombs to serve as substitutes for the deceased...you are getting you Greek and Egyptian myths mixed up some of that didn't come in to play until later in Egyptian history.
Sorry, Grrr, the mistake was in the slug saying it was Old Egypt. It wasn't. The kingdom is a made-up one. I write my stories a year or so in advance. I just made the mistake of saying it was Egypt in the slug.
Hey Anonymous, to you and the bunch of you history experts that come here just to throw a fit on historical accuracy, why don't you show us your usernames so we can read your historically accurate stories?
It pisses me off greatly that a neat well written and very erotic story like this gets nailed down because of two words more than necessary, if the writer hadn't written 'old egypt' you would have shut up. Two words and you nail it. Think about it.
BTW, 5 stars to sr71plt, it's a great story.
I didn't want to get pushy about it, but it could be about "Old Egypt" anyway. There are a chunk of centuries in Egyptian history between the pharaohs and Greeks (really, ancient Egypt, not just old Egypt) and the colonial period where this story could have fit into the context. But, yes, I find it frustrating at times that folks come back with minutia on what is mainly written for the erotica value, not the value of the setting.
I like sex but I love good storytelling better. His research is obviously more than the pastiche of settings other writers resort to in order to sell a story. One can be immersed to such depth in his plot you can forget that you started reading for a completely different thrill. His stories are far more than a vehicle for a happy ending, [forgive the double entendre] they are the labors of a person that has paid attention to constructing something worthy of a closer look. He has proven himself again and again as writer of note. Maybe one day we'll know who he is by his name on the Times best seller list- if that is his goal. In the meantime, I'll keep reading and learning and knowing a good thing when I read it.
English
Great, as usual!
I always love your work.
lush
You make everything sound so reasonable.I imagine your bed is seldom empty.
grrr
there are a few thing you really need to look up one its not king it is pharaoh and they didn't wear purple they wore leopard skins over their shoulders and added a lion’s tail to hang from their belt and it was not Hades.When the body died, parts of its soul known as ka (body double) and the ba (personality) would go to the Kingdom of the Dead. While the soul dwelt in the Fields of Aaru, Osiris demanded work as restitution for the protection he provided. Statues were placed in the tombs to serve as substitutes for the deceased...you are getting you Greek and Egyptian myths mixed up some of that didn't come in to play until later in Egyptian history.
Not Egypt
Sorry, Grrr, the mistake was in the slug saying it was Old Egypt. It wasn't. The kingdom is a made-up one. I write my stories a year or so in advance. I just made the mistake of saying it was Egypt in the slug.
hey anonymous
Hey Anonymous, to you and the bunch of you history experts that come here just to throw a fit on historical accuracy, why don't you show us your usernames so we can read your historically accurate stories?
It pisses me off greatly that a neat well written and very erotic story like this gets nailed down because of two words more than necessary, if the writer hadn't written 'old egypt' you would have shut up. Two words and you nail it. Think about it.
BTW, 5 stars to sr71plt, it's a great story.
Old Egypt
I didn't want to get pushy about it, but it could be about "Old Egypt" anyway. There are a chunk of centuries in Egyptian history between the pharaohs and Greeks (really, ancient Egypt, not just old Egypt) and the colonial period where this story could have fit into the context. But, yes, I find it frustrating at times that folks come back with minutia on what is mainly written for the erotica value, not the value of the setting.
Sr71plt is my ideal writer
I like sex but I love good storytelling better. His research is obviously more than the pastiche of settings other writers resort to in order to sell a story. One can be immersed to such depth in his plot you can forget that you started reading for a completely different thrill. His stories are far more than a vehicle for a happy ending, [forgive the double entendre] they are the labors of a person that has paid attention to constructing something worthy of a closer look. He has proven himself again and again as writer of note. Maybe one day we'll know who he is by his name on the Times best seller list- if that is his goal. In the meantime, I'll keep reading and learning and knowing a good thing when I read it.
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