A Minute Thirty Ch. 01

interesting start

I look forward to reading the next chapter

Good start but confused on the apartment thing. I'm guessing Leila's name wasn't on the lease agreement with Antonio is why he kicked her out.

Why in the hell was she screwing Antonio with no kind of protection knowing that fool was sharing himself? Leila definitely need up tell him about the baby even though he dropped her. I don't know what kind of law work Denise does but she need to talk her sister into pursuing full custody or getting child support.

I'm going to guess and say that since Leila is mad with Antonio she is going to take on the typical "I don't need no help" from him. Support is not for her it's for the child and telling him will be the right thing to do. At least she can say to their child she told Antonio. It will be on him to accept his father role or not.

Why?

I was so sad when I only saw one page. This is a great start.

Love it...

Great start to a promising story. Please continue.

*****

Shows promise.

Five.

This is fresh and new! I'm excited for an update, this shows so much promise!

Good start

I'm intrigued. Looking forward to the update.

Love love love

Colin is hot and Leila sounds like a beautiful brown woman. I love when the females are physically relatable and realistic.

This is a wonderful start. I am looking forward to the next update.

Yep I'm in love *happy_dance*

This story is promising

The narrative is enjoyable to read. I especially liked the line about Antonio being the worst thing since the flu.

I'm not sure if I like Leila though. She seems a bit crass and immature.

Can't wait for next installment

Great start, I'll watch for next chapter with enthusiasm.

Can't wait !

I loved part one can't wait for more

ok start

Could you make Leila a bit more likable

I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. Immature character at best.

Please please please update this! I am enjoying this story. *favorited*