Good job! I like the rustic feel of it. Flanks! Ha! How very farmish! I really liked the story. You explained everything at just the right parts. I'd like to read more of your stuff, if it's all this good.
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Anonymous02/25/06
great
sweet and tender versus wild and erotic at all the right parts, the perfect ending and a wonderful story!
keep writing!
and well written...just a lovely love story. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
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Anonymous08/26/08
Love it!
I loved this, it was just so cute and sweet! Somewhere in the story it made even me want to have children, and I've NEVER wanted children before. I guess a good story can change a person. If I have kids, I blame Grace!
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Anonymous06/16/09
A nearly unbelievably lucky woman
In that time frame nearly every woman in her situation with a dead husband would have been forced into prostitution. She would have been to if not for Justin's rescues.
Due to several really reading experiences I have been avoiding "Western" and 18th century online stories. Having read this I may try others. I like this story, it isn't "Wonderful" or "Fantastic" but it is a good read and an interesting take on how to get the girl without her knowing it.
I have read a couple of your stories and I must say u r indeed a versatile writer. I like how u think and your inovation. One thing I noticed though is when the couples start having sex there is no flow from the story into the sex. It comes across to me like the woman just decides to have sex with a complete stranger who have assisted her a couple of times. There is no relationship building in the stories. The same thing occured in the story with the girl by the beach and the dog tore her bikini top. Anyway all the same I enjoy your stories and will contine to read them all
English
Bravo
Good job! I like the rustic feel of it. Flanks! Ha! How very farmish! I really liked the story. You explained everything at just the right parts. I'd like to read more of your stuff, if it's all this good.
great
sweet and tender versus wild and erotic at all the right parts, the perfect ending and a wonderful story!
keep writing!
sweet...
and well written...just a lovely love story. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Love it!
I loved this, it was just so cute and sweet! Somewhere in the story it made even me want to have children, and I've NEVER wanted children before. I guess a good story can change a person. If I have kids, I blame Grace!
A nearly unbelievably lucky woman
In that time frame nearly every woman in her situation with a dead husband would have been forced into prostitution. She would have been to if not for Justin's rescues.
Due to several really reading experiences I have been avoiding "Western" and 18th century online stories. Having read this I may try others. I like this story, it isn't "Wonderful" or "Fantastic" but it is a good read and an interesting take on how to get the girl without her knowing it.
-- srgeek --
versatility
I have read a couple of your stories and I must say u r indeed a versatile writer. I like how u think and your inovation. One thing I noticed though is when the couples start having sex there is no flow from the story into the sex. It comes across to me like the woman just decides to have sex with a complete stranger who have assisted her a couple of times. There is no relationship building in the stories. The same thing occured in the story with the girl by the beach and the dog tore her bikini top. Anyway all the same I enjoy your stories and will contine to read them all
Very good
But a bit predictable. Well paced and draws you into the story.
Lovely little yarn
8~)
a great little yarn
loved how he just seemed to appear when she needed help....a touching and tender story of unfolding love....nice one...
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