All Comments on 'A Thief in the Night'

And she gets a gun or has a couple of friends with her when he arrives next and solves her problem permanently. If she isn't violent, and using a knife seems to indicate she is, she moves to another neighborhood or city. New ID is not that hard to get. At a minimum she knows at least one fence, who handles her stolen goods. For a fee the fence can get her connected with the right forger for the job.

Its really hard to suspend disbelief about this story.

Trying to make since of this story gave me a head ache. Get yourself a proof reader. It was so rushed that it wasn't enjoyable.

Is a pain in the ass. Now she's knows what a pain in the ass is like. Thanks for sharing this short story.

Normally, your average fifth grade student could do a better job with character development.

Interesting concept.

Don't let the negative comments get you down. They probably haven't tried to write anything.

"The Owner" seemed a bit stylized- he might need a name.

dismal

no more

Such a poor story, really awful

Blah - wasn't worth reading

She had a gun and the guy let her go lol..she could get another one ya know and finish this