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Truly
Beautiful metaphor that you have created it moves slow and sensual, third stanza is my fav
Lovely, just beautiful.
Beautiful
This is a beautiful poem. I gave it a five.
One of the better erotic poems I've read in a long time.
Now that is a metaphor!
Careful reading reveals that it is truly erotic. Well done!
Sorry to be late with comments ; just reached Mumbai from Moskba , Russia :
this is a "Nature"-al Treasure !
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