I absolutely loved these stories... Eventhough it was... if I could have the perfect honeymoon that they basically had... I'd be happy for life. You have a great talent. Your series made me smile!
What a completely enjoyable story. I wanted to aplaud for these two at the end. The fact that Mel was in a lesbian relationship added some character to the tale but 'George' was drawn as such an overbearing person that I had no sympathy for her when their partnership ended.
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Anonymous06/01/05
I thought it was great
It was great and I could imagine the characters. Keep up the work.
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Anonymous01/10/06
Well Done
In my mind's eye I pictured Melanie Griffith. Loved it!!!
English
Perfect
I absolutely loved these stories... Eventhough it was... if I could have the perfect honeymoon that they basically had... I'd be happy for life. You have a great talent. Your series made me smile!
Romance at it's best
What a completely enjoyable story. I wanted to aplaud for these two at the end. The fact that Mel was in a lesbian relationship added some character to the tale but 'George' was drawn as such an overbearing person that I had no sympathy for her when their partnership ended.
I thought it was great
It was great and I could imagine the characters. Keep up the work.
Well Done
In my mind's eye I pictured Melanie Griffith. Loved it!!!
The best!
I thought it was a beautiful love story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope to read more of your stories. Thanks for writing for us.
very good
liked these submissions a lot.Keep writing good stuff like these five chapters
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!
Fine Story
An ending foreshadowed but in complete congruence with what came before.
Thank you BB.
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