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Sexual Handbook advice
Better sexology handbooks write the sex fantasy role in erection problems. Erotic fantasy and the living life is two things at the average male brain, if it is not, that is problem: for example SEXUAL CANNIBALISM!......If the author had not written the first chapter I would have given 5*****. Why do not the authors write true open marriage and they write cuckolding instead of it. So I do not give anything. I give 5***** or 1*****,to the stories so this is a praise from me.
This is the Ending?
OK. So he was drugged by fast food. Doesn't surprise me. All you have to do is people watch in a restaurant to see the effects of poor eating habits.
Kind of disappointed and glad you didn't dwell on the divorce. That could have been embarrassing and potentially a novel in ugliness. However, Mike deserved an extreme heaping of revenge. What an asshole!! Dumping his totally unprepared wife and 2 kids. He deserves a world of shit dumped on him. At least Jim was wealthy enough to make a better life for Connie and kids. That was a nice touch.
Felt the beginning of this was a bit stilted. Hard to get started. That's just my opinion. For a non revenge story it was ok. Would like to see more as I think you're a very capable author.
I Liked It
I didn't think revenge was necessary It would not fit with Jims personality. He won Got the wife an erection and kids. Natalie and Jim will be cheating on each other in due time.Well done.
erotic.......in the mind too
I love the dialogue and what it means to all involved. He can do now what he couldn't do. SJP has a way of painting the words, with a certain feel that is hard to duplicate......thank you!
Happily ever after.
A fairy tale. Like this tale. So Connie is a dietician AND a sex therapist. She magically shows up and solves his erection problem. Sort of like she winked at him when he had a blindfold on. Ali kazam! Everything is all better. Too laughable.
Wonderful!
Well, I really liked this chapter. A woman should definitely exploit the male's fantasies!
Oh, Miss P.!!
You're manipulative pen... slashed at every turn and carved out a rut in redundant , obsessive self-loathing I'd describe as a torment so impossible to continue enduring that I'd surely either have had to join them and ...err..well, that's not happened...yet, Ahh, but you're such the tease sweet-severe and I'd ordered you (for which you must be punished) to bring this jello swim to a head as I come to know your strokes, because their recognition is demanded and insisted upon though they be worthy of established, sophisticated magazines and such. The gravity of the issue takes no prisoners unconditionally nor matter so lightly that it has no gravity or being... but it's always a guessing game, which sharpened QUILL you'll find, which rabid fan to ignore the most, such skilled strokes for the attentive impotent really suggest I've that problem and you're so boinkably empathetic...I just makes me want tah YOWHDULLLLlll it on off my tongue right here in fronta gawwd and everbody 8
Sincerely,
Songslinger)
A little more time
Connie came in to fast, I'm sure its appreciated, a good place to make this story more intament. Thanks
...as you have written...i truly believe in the power of the mind and...karma...took me a while for you to steer me in the right direction in this one but im glad that you did.
I have read many of your stories, But haven't commented enough. I really like your stories and your imagination. I am a fan, I hope you keep writing and entertaining us
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