Come to mama

what did I miss?

a beautiful poem, but the may "not be the right thing" troubles me. I have been working very hard at defining the right thing for myself.

It was a reference to incest...

I'm not sure there ever is a 'right' thing though. The world is too subjective for that. You can never make everyone happy and in the end does any of matter anyway? Hmm... maybe I do need to work on writing happy things.

nice allusion

I noticed what you were not quite saying, the repetition of come to mama was a give away but not fully obvious. the flow of the stanzas is well done.

I loved your poem. Your words flowed so nicely.