Our First Meeting

Once in want more

Not strange but it is almost true. Once a white woman gets a black cock in her she wants more.
My wife found that to be true. I have watched her many times with black men as they filed her with their cock and cum..

Characters

You need to develop characters to enact your story. First and second person just doesn't work in fiction. As a reader when you say "You", I rebel. I think 'that isn't me.'
Sorry, but because of "you and I", you lost this reader at the first paragraph.

Not all first person stories are bad

I personally don't do well writing in first person, but sometimes when you allow yourself to imagine the people... it works. I had fun reading this.

Assumption

Unless I missed something, Anonymous, how do you know it is a WWBM combination?
When he found the scarf on the nightstand I thought she was black.
That is why I think interracial stories should let us know the races of the characters, either in the title or within the story. Otherwise why be in the interracial category?
On another note, I have never heard the name Matasha before. That was why I thought she was black. Lol

comment from the author

Hello to all that has read/commented on my story. I really enjoy knowing what everyone thinks and it will help me in my future writings. I didn't want to put a race to either character as I left it for the imagination. But my coupling mentally as I wrote it was black man white woman. Wanted to make a few things out of the ordinary so the mind could wander. Thank you to my volunteer editor tangentjoker. She really did a great job in giving me the feedback and push I needed to get my first story out there. Happy reading and keep the comments coming. It will only makes my writings improve!

Well if she was white in your head she sure as hell shouldn't have had the name "Matasha." I think anybody would think that she was black.

my wife went black once

before we started dating my wife dated a black man........... she never wanted another black man after that!!!!!!!!

Hmmm...

I just have some constructive criticism. Ditch the 2nd Person perspective. 1st or 3rd Person is better for storytelling.

The writing is good.

4 Stars. The 2nd Person perspective cost 1.