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More please!
Great story!
I hope there will be more!
I Loved It!
I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait for more!
Cant wait for more. great start
Agree
Lovely start
Part 2
Have written a part 2 - it didn't pass editing first time - yet to find out why - have re-submitted.
loved it
I really enjoyed your story.....can't wait for the next chapter...
Good detail
I admit, I am hoping to get to the action, but I appreciate the attention to detail in building the foundation of the story. A good story needs substance, and you are doing a good job of establishing that. Looking forward to more. I hope Carlo is vicious!
Nicely Done
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens in Ch 2. Please don't keep us waiting!
Work true to character dialog into your story and your story will come alive. Well written , but all prose is dull. And all too common.
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