The Dinner (non-sexual)

Welcome new author. You are able to get a great deal of emotion and visualization into a small package. We were very much present in this scene, even if only as voyeurs. I personally don't care for such petty mind games, but you made me enjoy the scene anyway with your wonderful descriptions.

Gave it a 3* (WITH RESERVATIONS)

I read this with apprehension, we don't know his relationship to her, whether he loves her or not, but clearly he has the power to terrify her, she is waiting to be whipped, and expects it, for no particular reason. I get exasperated with master/slave stories,
I always wonder how a woman can live just primping and preening all day and be waiting kneeling at the door for his arrival, what a boring, senseless, fearful existance.

I am the author

I thank you for your comments. If you took from this that she is terrified of the Master then you are wrong. She (my real life slave) is very happy as she would attest. She very much loved this story when I wrote it.

Again I thank you both for your comments. This was my first submission and I do hope to make many more. Any comments will be greatly appreciated.