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Games of Elfkind Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/12/13

Keep on going.

Realy like the story and looking forward to more, never give up the good and hard work.

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by GoesGrunt12/06/14

Hard to Judge

I can't really rate the story yet since it isn't developed enough yet. Being well written and well told, the character development is really make or break for this story.

On the other hand, it's been more than good enough so far that I'd like to read more!

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