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by EvelynBat

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Rod_LoverRod_Loverover 10 years ago
Wonderful

Loved your story - please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Story shows promise...

Needs fuller development

EvelynBatEvelynBatover 10 years agoAuthor
Thankyou for the comments

This is actually the first ever erotica I have written so I had no idea if people would like it. Hope to write others soon and develop more :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is in the wrong category.

This story is an Incest/Taboo story. If you put your story in the right category then you reach the right audience to appreciate it.

chennai_rakshasanchennai_rakshasanover 10 years ago
Well begun

Yeah, this is not romance anyway but you CAN write a good story. Choose the right category next time around. Good work! :-)

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