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by Anonymous

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by Rod_Lover09/27/13

Wonderful

Loved your story - please write more.

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by Anonymous09/27/13

Story shows promise...

Needs fuller development

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by EvelynBat09/27/13

Thankyou for the comments

This is actually the first ever erotica I have written so I had no idea if people would like it. Hope to write others soon and develop more :)

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by Anonymous09/27/13

This is in the wrong category.

This story is an Incest/Taboo story. If you put your story in the right category then you reach the right audience to appreciate it.

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by chennai_rakshasan09/27/13

Well begun

Yeah, this is not romance anyway but you CAN write a good story. Choose the right category next time around. Good work! :-)

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