by RjThoughts
So short, with an irresistable drive! Great!
It feels like I got in on the middle of the story, was there a part one where the chivalrous action is explained? It also feels like we've been cheated out of the ending. Stories are, or a least should be, more than just about the sex. It was over before I even got to know what was going on. Please expand and give us the whole story.
Well, there goes 5 wasted minutes I'll never get back again! No beginning, no end, it's not a story - just random thoughts, not worth the time or energy to read them - very disappointing.