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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Nice, real nice.😊😊😊

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Intersting Story Starter.....

I like the idea of the story it sounds like a good story starter, but if you do decide to acctually spin a story out of this drawing you do NEED to WORK ON your GRAMMER. And speaking on drawing... Let's talke about that: It's very good but the ball gag on her looks some how primitive to the rest of the picture, in addtion the background is a little dull, dispite the mirror image of the slave/houseWIFE. I would have added some kind of 'Kitchen' background or a at least a 'House' backgrond. And not that dull purple background.

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