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by Sean Renaud

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DocCIS over 10 years ago

Good job, but a few errors...

Great job as always Sean...but caught a few obvious mistakes that hopefully you'll fix for re-reads ;)

Definitely stuck to the Story Ideas thread, so great job on taking the idea and hitting a home run!

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

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...you get your YOU'RE and YOUR mixed up:

YOU'RE = YOU ARE = YOU'RE NAKED

YOUR = BELONGS TO = YOUR CAR

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