Very nice! I really enjoyed this!
That kind of acceptance makes the sex oh so much hotter and better. Very well done sir/ma'am? Unfortunately this TS isn't 18 any more, but I would love for my first time to be just as passionate ;)
Can't wait for S to drape something red over the fence. Next instalment soon please
Would have liked them to be a bit closer in age, but that is just my Midwest, white bread, anal upbringing. The story was very good though. Would like to see more.
Very erotic and well written. Gave it 5/5. Hopefully there's a sequel soon but if not, am looking forward to any of your future transsexual stories (you definitely need to write more, this one was great)!
Gorgeous. Mmmmm. Like JainaTS, this TS is also no longer 18 (I wish). When i was that age, as terrified as I was of being caught as "Deborah" I continually secretly fantasised that a guy would catch me all dressed up. I look back at how naive I was at that age. I was late 20s by the time I had the unforgettable opportunity to use the same words Stephanie used, "Fuck Me" I will never ever forget the indescribable excitement of looking up into his eyes as I rolled the condom onto a man for the first time in my life knowing I was soon to "become a woman" for him. I totally relate to Stephanie's delightful, admirable situation.
loved your story. So loving and tender, just the way the first time should be regardless of persuasion! There will be more will there not? I hope so.
I have to say, out of all the transsexual stories I read here, yours was very well written. Your transition was very good. But most importantly, the in depth emotion you delivered.
I got to be honest. Despite being very well written, I personally did not like it. Instead of being aroused, I was feeling so much emotion for this young girl. I know the girl is eighteen and she is an adult legally. However, she is a child mentally. She hasn't experience life yet. And to top it all off, she is a transgender. But most importantly, one of the people that is meant to love her and protect her has left her life, which is her dad. I know guys like young girls and I respect it - age is just a number, but this just too young. However, with every imperfection a character delivers, a readers sees realism of everyday life being portrayed by these characters. Every character has a reason for his or hers actions. Therefore, you displayed the answers for your characters actions. In spite of your characters revealing their inner thoughts, the story is still in the beginning stages and your characters are still evolving.
The thing that really intrigues me about the story is the emotions. Like I said before, I haven't come across a fiction writing in here that delivered depth. I consider this to be a psychological writing. For example, the internal thoughts that the leading protagonist displayed not just once but several times. Not only did we get to read about what he was thinking, but what he thought about her as well. It was very intense.
I don't know if your intention was to create such in depth story or you just simply wanted to write an erotic fantasy fiction, either way, you should continue the aspect you have written .This story could turn out to be one dramatic psychological fiction.
One last thing. Since your story was very well written, you should bring sophisticated vocabulary in your piece of work, as well as a lot of figure of speech. Furthermore, if you keep writing and practicing, you will become such a great writer.
I hope to read future new stories from you.
Please I beg of you, continue this story. I loved it so much, one of the best I've read in a long time. Emotion, depth, and hot descriptive sex, the perfect mix.
Great to see some time devoted to the sex and the orgasms. SOme stories here are long on build up but the cum only gets a sentance or two. Very hot, I got off on this big time.
she was so hot-I'd have climbed a fence for her too-sweet girl, nice hot sex, good story, well-written, thanks
Been x-dressing since I was 10. I just wanted to look pretty and sexy like models in the magazines and I loved the attention from guys on the streets. Yet, it never came across my mind to have sex with men. But your story really stirs something in me and makes me wonder what it would really be like with a cock in my mouth or even down there! Please write more about Stpehanie and her lover(s)!
incredible story moreeeeeeee please
God, I loved your story. Wished I could experience something like that in real life.
I would love to see you continue this for a least another chapter to see how life works out between these two.
Wow, absolutely loved it! More please!
Fantastic stuff, well written, extremely exciting!
Now thats how you write a fuck story! Awesome sex and lots of cum. Plus you spent some time developing the charactors. Believeable people in an unlikely but totally hot situation. I want more. Will you be fucking sweet stephanie again? Does she become more confident? More please!
Was so yummy. Want to climb in my window and fuck me too? I have some nice slutty red panties too! ;)
Now this I like. As soon as I get home I'm going to be jerking off to this! Please write more.
Love the style... Can't wait for step two where she maybe fucks you?
There is nothing better than making love to a woman with something extra.
It had happened to me and now I am addicted to it.
Send more stories please.
grate story looking forward to more of the same . As a shemale my self it was realy well written so I am very happy whitth it so far pls more soon yours leann xxx
This was very well written. There are a lot of us out here who look back at moments such as this with fondness. Someone older seeing us and loving us for who we truly are rather than the abuses and condemnations from family and peers.
I need #2!!!
Now we're waiting for Part II :) ........... and III lol
Great story! I hope you write more like this. Thanks
Not my normal read but well crafted and admittedly hot.
CONFUSING, but Hot :)
"Almost ashamed to meet my eyes, she glanced away and whispered, "Okay."
That was good enough for me."
this part honestly made me burst out laughing
MORE PLEASE!!!!! SOOO HOT!!
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