reminds me of past experience enjoyed will follow in future
A great story! Well told, vivid, and with a twinkle in the eye twist at the end. I loved it! Keep up the great work!
That's a hot story.....well done
Very well done, well written, good imagery, pacing just right. The little twist at the end sliding over into inadvertent edging was a nice touch. I do hope you continue to write, you're very good at this.
But well written. Will keep an eye out for more.
Such a lovely tale, great writing flare and style~!
But creepy. I fear for her safety.
Love to watch being watched. Nice
Thanks for the comments everyone....fear not for her safety. ....i can assure you she's is...and will be...fine ;)
This story blows.
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reminds me of past experience enjoyed will follow in future
Great Job!
A great story! Well told, vivid, and with a twinkle in the eye twist at the end.
I loved it!
Keep up the great work!
Wow
That's a hot story.....well done
wonderful ...
Very well done, well written, good imagery, pacing just right. The little twist at the end sliding over into inadvertent edging was a nice touch. I do hope you continue to write, you're very good at this.
Scary...
But well written. Will keep an eye out for more.
lovely
Such a lovely tale, great writing flare and style~!
Well written
But creepy. I fear for her safety.
Voyeur?
Love to watch being watched. Nice
Thanks for the comments everyone....fear not for her safety. ....i can assure you she's is...and will be...fine ;)
boo
This story blows.
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