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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/25/13

Ashson's stories are getting dangerously close to being as creepy and depraved as the shitty WACC stories and that straight sucks. You are a good writer but your stories have gotten creepier and creepier to the point that they are no longer any fun to read. Nobody and I mean nobody likes a creepy asshole like this man. You seem to love writing about complete assholes with no good qualities. Rape!!! Are you fucking serious!?!? Come on man, what the fuck!?!?

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by Anonymous09/25/13

Have to Agree with the Last Commenter

Pretty creepy story Rape? Really? This is supposed to be erotic? Sorry Ashon usually like your entries This sucked big time.

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by Anonymous09/25/13

Sorry, but rape leaves the recepiant traumatized

all he did was leave her wanting more

no comparison

had this been in reluctance/non-consent, you two would have been whacking off like crazy, and you both know it

case dismissed

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by Lickideesplit09/25/13

Wife is sleepy, NOT adventuresome!

Wrong category! Much more appropriate for Reluct/NonConsent or First Time! Sweetie, in this tale, is a slave-driver, rather than adventuresome! Sleepy enough to farm out her Hubby to the Sitter - NOT LW!

In either of those categories, once readers get past the blatant and repeated violation of the 'NO means no!' principle, we are left with a very-well sculpted tale! That IS, however, a lot to get past!

Unrated

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by Anonymous09/25/13

RE: case dismissed

This isn't the non-consent/reluctance category though is it!? It would take a real asshole to force a girl into this and say it's all ok because she ended up enjoying it. She is a little girl that an old man took advantage of even after repeatedly telling him no. I'm not sure what you think the definition of rape is but you comment says a lot about how you feel about it. You think someone who hates a story with rape in it would actually be jerking off thinking about rape? Did you bump you head as a child? What caused you to have these delusions?

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by Anonymous09/25/13

Case Dismissed

Youra fucking retard. I suppose if this happened to your daughter while she was babysitting you would say the same thing? .....Thought not dipstick. I know this is fantasy but Rape is not erotic you fuckwad

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by Anonymous09/25/13

What the fuck is wrong with you, retard? Rape is non-con not LW.

And if he was prepared to fuck her against her will, I don't think he would care if she was underage you fucking pedophile!!! Why don't you do the world a favor and blow what little brains you have out of that shit cave you call a head and find out if there really is an afterlife.

If I wanted to read a fucking rape story, I would have gone there.

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by Anonymous09/25/13

Rape and Nothing else

Not worth commenting on

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by Alberta Al09/25/13

Should have been Loving Wives

You would have attracted more crack pots that way.
Well written.

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by Anonymous09/26/13

whoa... wrong category!

Wrong, wrong, wrong category. Not cool...

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by Anonymous09/27/13

C'mon Ashson...

...The comments are more fun when they are being beligerent about a wife being "loving" in the loving wives section or about how wrong "non-con" is in the non-con section. No need to give then something real to complain about. That almost makes them sound literate.

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