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Ashson's stories are getting dangerously close to being as creepy and depraved as the shitty WACC stories and that straight sucks. You are a good writer but your stories have gotten creepier and creepier to the point that they are no longer any fun to read. Nobody and I mean nobody likes a creepy asshole like this man. You seem to love writing about complete assholes with no good qualities. Rape!!! Are you fucking serious!?!? Come on man, what the fuck!?!?
Have to Agree with the Last Commenter
Pretty creepy story Rape? Really? This is supposed to be erotic? Sorry Ashon usually like your entries This sucked big time.
Sorry, but rape leaves the recepiant traumatized
all he did was leave her wanting more
no comparison
had this been in reluctance/non-consent, you two would have been whacking off like crazy, and you both know it
case dismissed
Wife is sleepy, NOT adventuresome!
Wrong category! Much more appropriate for Reluct/NonConsent or First Time! Sweetie, in this tale, is a slave-driver, rather than adventuresome! Sleepy enough to farm out her Hubby to the Sitter - NOT LW!
In either of those categories, once readers get past the blatant and repeated violation of the 'NO means no!' principle, we are left with a very-well sculpted tale! That IS, however, a lot to get past!
Unrated
RE: case dismissed
This isn't the non-consent/reluctance category though is it!? It would take a real asshole to force a girl into this and say it's all ok because she ended up enjoying it. She is a little girl that an old man took advantage of even after repeatedly telling him no. I'm not sure what you think the definition of rape is but you comment says a lot about how you feel about it. You think someone who hates a story with rape in it would actually be jerking off thinking about rape? Did you bump you head as a child? What caused you to have these delusions?
Case Dismissed
Youra fucking retard. I suppose if this happened to your daughter while she was babysitting you would say the same thing? .....Thought not dipstick. I know this is fantasy but Rape is not erotic you fuckwad
What the fuck is wrong with you, retard? Rape is non-con not LW.
And if he was prepared to fuck her against her will, I don't think he would care if she was underage you fucking pedophile!!! Why don't you do the world a favor and blow what little brains you have out of that shit cave you call a head and find out if there really is an afterlife.
If I wanted to read a fucking rape story, I would have gone there.
Rape and Nothing else
Not worth commenting on
Should have been Loving Wives
You would have attracted more crack pots that way.
Well written.
whoa... wrong category!
Wrong, wrong, wrong category. Not cool...
C'mon Ashson...
...The comments are more fun when they are being beligerent about a wife being "loving" in the loving wives section or about how wrong "non-con" is in the non-con section. No need to give then something real to complain about. That almost makes them sound literate.
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