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Rhythm is perfect for the content, the content was almost visual if you know what I mean. Exciting. From a memory?

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OldBear-there's this thought in modern poety that it's all about the imagery and pretty words that paint it. My intention here was to try, with very basic words and very limited imagery, to show that a poem can be any mix of language, even the most bare. To me a poem is something visceral, something that draws a response, and can be something beyond flowery prose written by Mary Oliver.

Not a past memory, maybe a future one some day...