All Comments on 'Bait a Hook Ch. 13'

Every installment just gets better and better -- to paraphrase what Rob said to Bobby -- 'It keeps getting better and better!" You got a very moving and sexy story here, and the boys give each other wonderful Christmas presents -- in bed and out of bed. Bobby loves Rob and his "magnificently hairy chest," and Rob enjoyed the love-making from Bobby. Just when it seems they can't find more to do in the loving department, you find another loving episode! I love the characters and their story! Keep this great story going! Thanks for the great story chapters!

I keep thinking that nothing else exciting can happen but then this happens.. And the sex scenes in this chapter were very hott!

possibly the hottest chapter so far. I really want to see them out in real life now. I can't imagine the rumors wouldn't be flying. They spend all their time together except for during sports. Rob sees none of his friends anymore. How will their relationship go from here? I can't see them keeping it a secret. I hope you take them outside of the house and family in the next chapter. I know you had to have them alone, but I think it was silly to act like they couldn't go b/c grandma would guess their relationship or something. I see no reason why they wouldn't have just introduced Rob as a friend. They weren't obligated to tell her the whole truth in order to go to dinner. But, I really enjoyed the chapter. Lookin forward to more.

cannd

'I've been so freaking hot and leaking in these briefs all morning.' So was I. Did you have a spy camera on me this morning? Warning: Only read chapter with a box of tissues nearby.

Excellent! You have done a fantastic job crafting a story where I care about these young men and look forward to seeing them grow even closer - if that's possible!! - in their love. Oh, and it's so fucking sexy!

This is beyond hot!