All Comments on 'Zoe's Lucid Imagination'

Very nice "different" angle for a story!

I'd like to read more chapters about Zoe & her adventures.

I think some self-bondage, chastity & self teasing to name a few could be in order!

Certainly a new twist on the ex/voy concept - I love the general plot concept. Refine your use of verb tenses a bit, and give us more exposition on what Zoe looks like. Facial features? Anything special or unusual? Why is she so introverted? She seems like a pretty girl - why so shy? You could really turn this plot concept into a brilliant erotic horror novel if you turn it up a notch and twist the dial a little. I'll be keeping an eye out to see what "they" make Zoe do next... Kenny

It's sooo nice to read good writing and something new. (The old formulas are well worn.) I'd love to hear more. If some of the voices argued with each other, Zoe could find herself caught in the middle making things more difficult for her. Thanks for a very exciting read.

Very good love the concept. Can't wait for more

A very good read; and a good start to what I hope will be many more chapters. This concept really strikes home with me!

Most original story I have read in a long time. Can not wait for the next chapter. Excellent work.