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Axina and Burk Ch. 02

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by Dry_opinion09/27/13

Cruel but funny and sexy

I liked the story. It's funny, arousing, intriguing and interesting. I especially liked how each character is pursuing his own gain and has ulterior motives. The combination of hot scenes and logical fantasy plot is hard to find. Kudos to the author. 5 stars.
One thing that would make the story better is a fair warning in the beginning of every chapter. The story contains some cruel verbal abuse as well as acts of displaying dominance physically bordering on BDSM.
Otherwise, looking forward to new chapters.

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by Kingmaker71109/30/13

More!

This is a great series but the entries are too short! Very tantalizing but it ends as quickly as it begins!

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by Anonymous10/03/13

Interesting. I wonder if it is possible for Burk to have his future slaves transfer bosom to someone else. I could totally see him giving that peasant girl or someone else who impresses him more power as a reward.

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by Anonymous11/12/15

intelligent reading

You know this is actually pretty good writing. LOL. Reminds me of someone, what's her name? Oh yeah, Marah Iafew. Some amusing shyt.

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by Anonymous12/12/16

Now get the fuck out of my office , ha that's gangster.

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