Power Play Ch. 02

Hate it,

so he turns an independant, working, women with dignity and self respect into a worthless doormat, who will have all personality and character of a blow up sex doll.
I can see suicide for depression and worthlessness and when he finally marries a real human female in her future.

The title of this implies that at some point Lena will engage in her own battle, I hope that this happens soon as I think it will make the storyline more dynamic. Come on, he can't have everything his own way! She may need this to make her happy in bed but that's just one part of life and I think she is going to want more than is being offered. Looking forward to chapter 3. Good read so far.

I disagree

I can't see him turning her into a mindless slave. I think he is going to help her bury her past, but at the same time rebuild her into the powerful woman she most obviously is. She will still be submissive to him though.
That's just my thought...let's see where the author takes this.
Excellent so far.

Jury will need more evidence

I don't get the evil puppet master vibe from him. Dude has major cojones and obviously no self esteem issues. :). She has enough issues for the both of them. I'll roll with what he as said about wanting her to experience pleasure and push her limits.

Excellent

I just hate it when a Sir will get his sub all hot and bothered and ready to climax, and when she asks to climax in desperation, he says "yes". What the hell? I love how he literally forced her to disobey him. He knew what he was doing, and even with years of experience, I am hard pressed to believe that a sub would be able to withstand that force without cumming. I hope that the resulting forced orgasms were not the last of her punishment. I see much worse coming from Damon, and I CANNOT wait!!! Please continue and make it as dirty and cruel as you can.