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by LesseloovesPeter09/23/13

"Logic plays no part/when hearts belong" my favorite line, really connects with me.

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by Anonymous09/29/13

I Didn't Like

I didn't like the lover. He should never leave her. He should stay and marry her and keep her safe and protected and in his arms. I know reality is what it is. But I know I want the lover to stay. Great write, Mamaval. Keep going. Little more rhythm would be nice. But overall this poem RAWKED!

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