Wheelbarrow

Not much to this

Nothing erotic about it particularly. In a sense, it is kind of like thinking what is the point of this? It isn't badly written, but what was going to happen is telescoped, and quite honestly, Gloria nor the narrator seem to be into it either...

Ashson = the biggest asshole on the planet who has no friends and has to look over his shoulder to make sure the neighbor isn't aiming his bb gun. If your goal is to write stories where all you characters are hated with a passion then you have succeeded. Just once write a story where the male lead is not the biggest asshole you could make him. Or is that just a part of your personality that you can't keep hidden. You are like the frat boy that everyone was nice to but secretly hated and wanted to kill!

Piss on you Ashson

You brainless sorry excuse of a human being. Bet your parents wish they had aborted you.

Well, I liked it. ****

Thanks for writing. tom anon

Really poor effort.

Not erotic, not new, not interesting, not very well written. I was stupid for thinking it might be, this guy is a wimpy J.P.B.

This read like the married guy next door having fanstisies about sexing up the hot wife of his neighbor.

Boring!

Reads like a boring stock analysis.

This little fantasy...

gave me a hardon! Thanks for the thrill.

Flash, Drive

The King of the quickie. Our Bull keeps his neighbor off-balance with his ability to challenge ambiguous statements. Very wry humor at work! Before the Sweetie-next-door could convince him she wasn't THAT KIND I girl...she WAS.

Then he lies to her suspicious Hubby by telling him the truth! Let's see...what other garden implements can this rake bring to 'bare' during his down-time? Nice hoe!