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Bad Vacation

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/28/13

allyeball

you are a crazy husband why don't whore the wife back at home-you moral shifter.

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by Anonymous09/28/13

Nothing Erotic About This

There is nothing really erotic about this story, unless some find it to be erotic just thinking about their wife (or a wife thinking about herself) being caught up in a non-consentual situation like this .

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by Anonymous09/28/13

This guys is a fucking loser! What kind of asshole would dream up the shit he has posted today? You are a real pathetic excuse for a person. Yeah I read your true account of what happened with your wife. If that is true and you are here posting stories like this after the fact then you are a real poor excuse for a human being. Good luck with eternity in hell asshole!!!!

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by Anonymous09/28/13

I look at this more as a

screen play. We don't moralize when we watch or read the Godfather when bad things happen to people. It was a bit over the top. It should have appeared in rape/reluctance.

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by Anonymous09/28/13

Where did this nigger pop up from?

Is that you sambo?

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by Anonymous09/28/13

Tell Me?

What has happened to Loving Wives Is this all there is? A constant pile of unerotic cuckold,IR garbage. Poorly written,poorly conceived. Just plain poor.

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by handaJizz10/05/13

take it you DON'T work for the Jamaican tourist office

I was thinking of booking a vacation to Jamaica... might try Florida instead!

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by Anonymous10/17/13

awful story

this was one of the worst stories ever

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by Cindykay11/27/13

erotic

I guess I must be in the minority but I enjoyed your story!

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by Anonymous02/12/14

An Interesting story.

I liked your story a lot. People will probably argue but the amount of sex slavery is sky-rocketing. The people that investigate this stuff claim this American U.S. state, in the west without much population currently has about 3000 sex slaves in captivity. I find the story entirely believable.

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by Anonymous09/14/14

As told before!

Shoot the niggas - cocks with a head above. Send them back to what god's given fate for them is: to serve and stay dumb!

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by Anonymous08/31/15

you are a sick little fuck.

Hopefully you are not allowed around children.

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by Anonymous10/19/16

Just no

How shall I count the ways it was horrendous. 1.poorly written 2.poor plot 3. No forced only "forced sex" 4. If it was forced sex there is another name for that it's called rape. So under wrong category by your definition. 5. To cover everything else that is wrong...WTF?!

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by Anonymous12/21/16

You CAN NOT rape the willing .... Quote: "Karen at a party laughing and joking as she is stripped and taken by a man with a simply huge cock. She was either acting really well or she got an awful lot from it as she had a big climax" ....

Bet Cucky Hubby can't wait for her to deliver "HER" NIGGER BABY! After her delivery maybe he can take her down to the the street corner and makes some real "coin" off her "large fleshy projections". She really sounded like she was "sorry" .... "sorry" that she did not have Mose's BBC up her one of her slimy holes!!! Bet "Hubby" can't wait to slurp down his next cream pie desert!

Oh and if you haven't figured it out .... YOU got a "1"!!!!

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by Anonymous01/09/17

I can NOT say this LOUD ENOUGH ....

NIGGER PLEASE!!!! TIME FOR A ROPE, A HIGH TREE LIMB AND A BLOW TORCH .... Hasta La Vista RASTA NIGGERS!!!!

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