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My Girlfriend Discovers BBC Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/29/13

more pleases!

I loved this story! Please post more when you can!

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by Anonymous09/29/13

Loved it!

Very promising set up, though I'd like to know more about each character. Any chance of a conversation between the three of them, maybe after *it* happens? I'd love it if Terrance would be disappointed in the narrator, something akin to "fuck, thought you weren't like the other whiteboys" or something. Keep up the great work!

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by Anonymous09/29/13

Nice.

Very nice story.....interested to see where it goes from here.

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by Anonymous09/30/13

Sexy and well written

My compliments! Sexy, well written, and full of promise. Keep going: don't leave us hanging!

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by Anonymous09/30/13

Eh.

Could use some work, especially the writing portion, but not bad.

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by Anonymous09/30/13

message from Charles Darwin

It is imperative that this limp dicked wimp is immediately locked in a cock cage and denied any access to this womans pussy. For the good of the human gene pool he must never be allowed to breed

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by james_3867109/30/13

great start

jsut like my wife and i we love black cock
we want to hear more about this one
she has to have black cock all the time now

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by TinyTim_5209/30/13

Amazing start! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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by Steeldick10/02/13

Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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by devilspy200110/02/13

Not to bad

Now, who is going to approach the roommate? I know as a bi hung stud I have few rules, but I do not play with coworkers or roommate's. And the couple, married or otherwise have to understand, to me it is just great sex. They cannot expect me to steal the woman or Master them or any of that. I have to want to fuck and breed the woman. And If I choose, the sub male will suck my cock and swallow loads or even allow me to fuck his pussy and breed him as well. So who talks to the roommate? He may have some of the same rules.

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by Anonymous10/03/13

More!!

Please continue! This is sooo good!

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by Anonymous10/05/13

just awesome

please continue

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