Harsher than I care for, but what truly sits wrong is that I don't see any training or teaching of the women. It just appears to be trial and punishment, and this with a group of newbies. Not much respect for the trainers or husbands as you have written it. I can't suspend disbelief enough to believe that this far into the deep would be such a positive experience for the wives.
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Anonymous10/03/13
first thing, 'abuse' is not BDSM 1*
this is a fairly nasty story, not a 'turn on' at all. I suppose there is one consolation,
the slaves are actually allowed to eat, it appears that starving the slave into submission seems to be the 'norm' in a lot of Lit stories.
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Anonymous03/05/14
Weekend includes Sunday !
Unfortunitly this story ends in the middle. When will chapter 3 appear ?
English
Loving this story so much. Cant wait to see what happens next and what the Big Event is. Thank you sharing this with us!!! Five more stars from me.
Humm
Harsher than I care for, but what truly sits wrong is that I don't see any training or teaching of the women. It just appears to be trial and punishment, and this with a group of newbies. Not much respect for the trainers or husbands as you have written it. I can't suspend disbelief enough to believe that this far into the deep would be such a positive experience for the wives.
first thing, 'abuse' is not BDSM 1*
this is a fairly nasty story, not a 'turn on' at all. I suppose there is one consolation,
the slaves are actually allowed to eat, it appears that starving the slave into submission seems to be the 'norm' in a lot of Lit stories.
Weekend includes Sunday !
Unfortunitly this story ends in the middle. When will chapter 3 appear ?
Excellent story!
Excellent story! More please.......
continue?
please continue the story!
Keep going!
I love it! Keep going..
Leave the story this way is a crime
Why?
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