All Comments on 'Nursing My Old Male Friend'

Its not my fetish but its written well, coherent, cohesive, and interesting, I like your writing voice, too.

Good job.

It's certainly an exciting fetish and you've made a beautiful, tender story about it.

But my God that was erotic.

More of this story or something similar would be very welcome.

Most erotic stories tend to be mechanical and dull though this site is better than others, But this story stands out for the smooth narrative skill, gripping storytelling and has interesting and three dimensional characters, Trust we can expect a lot more from this writer.

Great story! I hope you do continue!

good story, but a little too long.

It was just a beautiful story of two people finding each other. I hope there is more of this, or anything from you.

Hell Yeah!!! Very hot. hope you will write more chapters.

Loved it!

would love to know what happens next. love the taste of breast milk

I like where this is going, great set up well done.

You have left me aroused and wanting!

One of my fantasy. Very well written, left me wanting more.

eagerly waiting chapter 2. your arousing story excited me to completion

This is a great story! I really enjoyed it! I would love to be Bill!

You write very well. interesting and Vivid!

Please continue!

A very unusual and tantalising story x x Loved it so far...The age difference does it for me LOL

Looking forward to your next submission, very delightful story!

Terrific story and something that's always appealed to me. Loved the atmosphere you created and the tenderness between the two characters. A plausible storyline (who knows, mabye one day....!) and a delicious one too. If I've any criticism at all it would be that the dialogue felt a little unnatural and stilted at times, hence my 4 out of 5 star rating.

I write bits and pieces myself (not so much erotica) and find that dialogue needs constant rereading, and at different times. I'll write something one day, reread it the next, and that's when I tend to spot the sore thumbs sticking out that weren't there yesterday!

This is simply my opinion. All in all I loved the story and could really taste the warm, cloying sweetness in my mind as my own cock began throbbing with my quickening pulse.

Thank you.

Such a fantastically erotic strory, very well written and has got me horny as hell!!! thanks x

Would love to see how this story progresses. Please write more!

Tell us more about feeding him.

your story is very well written ....I loved it ....I wish you had already written more.... would love to read more... your store made me wish it was me... I got very horny...and my breast were aching for the attention in the story.... my clit throbbing for attention.... hubby was happy when he came home because I jumped his bones...LOL .... we then read to story together and re-enacted it...Mmmmm so good!!!!

We are all waiting to see what will happen with Megan and Bill. Hope to read more soon.

This was a delightful story. A continuation would be well-received by many!

Keep on writing. You're good...

This needs more......

This has been a fantasy of mine for a long time! ….. nicely done

i just adore stories of men, particularly older men suckling from milky fat lactating titties oh yes, i can feel them suckling ... men sucking nipples is always a turn on, be it milking or not ... sucking nipples is like suck a beautiful cock

It is a shame you never finished this story.