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by theoncomingstorm

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago

Unwrap my soul.

What is hidden there?

The shame of my humanity.

whats to be ashamed of? we all have pasts, things we don't want to deal with, but if you are a better person because of it then do not be shamed be proud that youy made it :-) enough preachy crap onto my thoughts

you write with a raw chilling tap into your world and allow the reader to connect with your words on a personal level, I like the rhetorical questions and your answers seem to be honest.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

I've been down a similar road. Nicely written.

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