Poetic Attraction

Absolutely fan-fucking-tastic. Love the use of language, the beat...omg love it!!

Thank you!

I really appreciate the feedback & kind words. Thank you @Lesseloovespeter

How did I miss this one?

this is cool, you have a sweet flowing rhythm, could be pared back in few places, but all in all solid work :)

Wonderful

That was absolutely fabulous MzFly!!!

Fantabulous... literally!!!

Wonderfully creative. The use of descriptive phrases for you and your lover added zest and clarity. "Satisfied with satisfaction." Shiver me timbers, mate... you rock the house!

I HEART IT!

A Multitalented poet with STYLE and a sense of HUMOR? ** grinning **
So damn HOT!
** BRILLIANT **

MzFly - Another beautiful poem!

I can only imagine what your poetry, will be like in a few more years?

HotSexyLesbian: Toula.

Stunning, Astounding.

I am agog, Wait, that's not what I meant, damn, I'm a total trembling wreck. Cat's got my tongue. Can't even wrap my brain around the words I need to express how wonderfully playful and arousing this was as I read it. I was perched, tightly wound, waiting as you teased and sprung every word and phrase.

This is one of the most erotic pieces of writing I have read. Wonderful. The playfulness, humor, sexiness, wow...I am rambling, I know, but if I wasn't running at the mouth and gushing, I'd be breathless and speechless.

Thank you.