All Comments on 'Poetic Attraction'

by MzFly

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Absolutely fan-fucking-tastic. Love the use of language, the beat...omg love it!!

MzFlyMzFlyover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I really appreciate the feedback & kind words. Thank you @Lesseloovespeter

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
How did I miss this one?

this is cool, you have a sweet flowing rhythm, could be pared back in few places, but all in all solid work :)

Wildcat2013Wildcat2013over 10 years ago
Wonderful

That was absolutely fabulous MzFly!!!

ShesUrDreamShesUrDreamover 10 years ago
Fantabulous... literally!!!

Wonderfully creative. The use of descriptive phrases for you and your lover added zest and clarity. "Satisfied with satisfaction." Shiver me timbers, mate... you rock the house!

adidasgaladidasgalabout 10 years ago
I HEART IT!

A Multitalented poet with STYLE and a sense of HUMOR? ** grinning **

So damn HOT!

** BRILLIANT **

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
MzFly - Another beautiful poem!

I can only imagine what your poetry, will be like in a few more years?

HotSexyLesbian: Toula.

ShadowsucksShadowsucksabout 9 years ago
Stunning, Astounding.

I am agog, Wait, that's not what I meant, damn, I'm a total trembling wreck. Cat's got my tongue. Can't even wrap my brain around the words I need to express how wonderfully playful and arousing this was as I read it. I was perched, tightly wound, waiting as you teased and sprung every word and phrase.

This is one of the most erotic pieces of writing I have read. Wonderful. The playfulness, humor, sexiness, wow...I am rambling, I know, but if I wasn't running at the mouth and gushing, I'd be breathless and speechless.

Thank you.

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