I like the way its developing. Just wish the chapters were a lil bit longer is all.
Many young men have similar feelings and desires. Often moms would like to help but are reluctant. In the right circumstances it can be wonderful.
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I like the way its developing. Just wish the chapters were a lil bit longer is all.
Good story
Many young men have similar feelings and desires. Often moms would like to help but are reluctant. In the right circumstances it can be wonderful.
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