How to Get You to Read My Story, #3

Nice!

I really liked this chapter, you should definitely continue it. I didn't like "obediently obeyed" and your eternal complain about the readers who do not vote/favourite/comment, but I voted 5 stars, because I really loved the way you were telling the story.

slow and interesting

It is slow and exciting,but the getting to read story is getting long and distracting as the seduction is good.Waiting to read more.

Well done again Suzan!

Loved reading Chapter 3 of your story. Really liked your comments in between.
Appreciated your thoughts about readers sending feedback to your stories or any other stories for that matter. Statistics about feedback was an eye opener.
I hope you do continue the story ... it is developing nicely. As I told you before, I like your style of writing. Sending you my regards.

Erostaticus

Thank you Susan

Well I think you're the best writer on Literotica, so I look out for your stories. There are few others that write as consistently well as you do.
If there was a way to give you 5 stars for a 'how to' story, I'd give you 5 stars.

You do write in a really good style, and hearing you I can understand your complaints about not getting the feedback both in votes and comments that is deserving of every writer. Though I would like to explain things from my view.
If I start to read a story and realize that it's not the type to really interest me, I don't want to put a bad score down. It might not have been what I like, but maybe what someone else does. And in the spirit of getting people to read a story, isn't keeping the highest score possible another trick to be used?
If I'm mistaken or you have any further thoughts, get back to me on it.

Excellent

Great writing and a fascinating commentary on what makes us read what we do.
Always love your stories

Delightful educational tease

I just loved the way you managed to 'drag' out a story by explaining what you do when writing! It takes some talent to do that.

Very titilating and extremely arousing nonetheless!

INFORMATIVE

I found this 'how-to' well written and a great help with my writing efforts. Your stories always attract my attention. GOOD LUCK!