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by Anonymous

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Gorgeous

Gorgeous Katie. I know how Katie feels too. My older sisters boyfriend (now husband) is frustratingly attractive. Would have loved to have been a Katie for him when I was a teen. :-)
Your story is exciting and romantic. I love how she has to stand on tip toes for him to kiss her, love how they talk about "making love" and totally relate to how easily she slips into becoming Katie.
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by Anonymous10/10/13

Hot

I love this story, it's so hot, and romantic too. I can't wait for part 2, please write it soon.

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