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punctuation
ever heard of it?
A bit rough
While the story was a bit well, unrefined, it is exactly what I was in teh mood for. Something raunchy with little plot and a full figured, full bushed, woman getting some
mature dominant woman
My favourite stories are those involving a mature, self-confident woman and a young, timid man. The woman is in her 50‘s, sexually aggressive and realistically portrayed. The man (under 30) is also realistically portrayed, submissive, sexually inexperienced and lost in lust wit this woman.
My fantasy is involving a couple in which the young man is rich (or has a very good job) and the woman is a prostitute at the end of her career. She had become fat, she shows her age, the men are not attracted anymore by her charms and the years of “working” didn’t provide financial security. By chance * the two of them get acquainted (i.e.: she’s get hired as cleaning lady of his condo) and she find that the boy is rich. She find also that because of his timidness he is without a girlfriend. Consequently, she took initiative * and manipulates the young man at a point he is lost...In the course of this relationship she discover the pleasure of domination and even the humiliation (i.e.: she’s complaining about his poor performance in bed and her need for a proper cock*). And of course, she discovers the pleasure of having money to spent as she wishes: fine clothes, cosmetics, beauty treatments, jewels etc; things that make her again attractive in the eyes of several men. ***
* it is to the writer to develop the idea.
There is no story on this website that is close to this fantasy. Could someone write this story, please? It could also involve incest, cuckolding, voyeurism, marriage, tease and denial, etc.
Much-needed mature anal!
Wow, this one got me off! I have to admit, I was a little confused that Literotica let you get away with both of you "talking" in the same paragraph. On one of my early stories I got flagged for that and had to change everything to go along with their "rules". But, as far as a hot and horny romp, it was great! Every young lad's fantasy for sure, I know it's mine and I'm not even young! Adding the rear action was the icing on the cake for me.
Story idea was ok
but I gave up because the punctuation was missing. It made this a terrible story to read. And as one other comment mentioned, how the hell did the Literotica editors let this through???? I can't tell you how many stories of mine were rejected because of punctuation, a fullstop out of place, and yet this gets through. It's ridiculous!!
Who cares?
Who cares about correct punctuatrion? This was a great story, easily readable, and all the right features. I never liked a mature lady who looked perfect at an older age. I like a big butt, saggy boobs and the reality of it. Very enjoyable!
Proofreading needed
The story started off great, but it was hard to fully enjoy it with all these grammatical errors. Also, the dialogue felt a bit rushed and wooden. This gem needs a bit of polishing; don't get discouraged, keep it up.
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