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by Anonymous

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by LesseloovesPeter09/28/13

Delicious!

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by Oldbear6309/29/13

Fiery hot,

Really well done, Todski.

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by todski2810/01/13

Thanks

old bear and Lesse as always

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by theoncomingstorm10/03/13

Wow, so intensely amazing! 5 stars... Love it!

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by HoneyAdored04/22/14

Wow! I think even my legs have gone weak now...Fabulous!

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by Trixareforkids05/29/14

Yeah,

What they said!

Love love love the line "my rhythm set by hearts beat" inspired working of heartbeats.

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