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by Anonymous

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by todski2809/28/13

You

paint some graphic mental images in sparse lines

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by Ashesh909/28/13

people

throw coins
in appreciation
@ the sidewalks ........

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by LesseloovesPeter09/28/13

so much implied.

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by Tristesse209/30/13

Ouch!

A little pill of potency. Well done.

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