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Jasmine's Desires Awakened

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/05/13

Story has potential but...

Find an editor. They can do wonders for you and your story. There are plenty on this site willing to help. Good luck moving forward.

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by Sugarpop036910/05/13

Story has potential

I am currently looking for an editor. Thank you for the advice.

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by Anonymous10/06/13

Good Story

I was really getting into it even with the grammar mistakes, then it abruptly ended, leaving me hanging. :-(

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