I really liked both parts so far. The grammar police are probably teachers since they get so irritated at small mistakes. Keep writing this series!
A fun, enjoyable story. While not a teacher, grammar goofs stick out and detract a little from the story. Keep at it, I like your imagination.
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I really liked both parts so far. The grammar police are probably teachers since they get so irritated at small mistakes. Keep writing this series!
Fun
A fun, enjoyable story.
While not a teacher, grammar goofs stick out and detract a little from the story.
Keep at it, I like your imagination.
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