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by Anonymous

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by Oldbear6309/29/13

Sweet and happy love. Old and deep or new and fresh, Lesse?

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by LesseloovesPeter09/29/13

new as yesterday, old as eternity...

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by GuiltyPleasure09/30/13

Nice....

....sentiment. You could end on the fifth line making it tighter and - um - sweeter. Five

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by LesseloovesPeter09/30/13

Thanks for the suggestion, Tristesse, I like that!

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